tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4263988256560129564.post4540483849912531013..comments2023-10-30T08:00:54.059-04:00Comments on Laurel's Leaves: Fleshing out a thin story: thin characterizationLaurel Garverhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03657218435228802535noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4263988256560129564.post-65368487297638286292016-12-02T21:24:10.281-05:002016-12-02T21:24:10.281-05:00Thanks, Jemi. I was planning to talk about conflic...Thanks, Jemi. I was planning to talk about conflict and juggling characters in another post, thickening thin plots in another, and finally going lusher with description. Stay tuned!Laurel Garverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03657218435228802535noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4263988256560129564.post-12478351098686520332016-12-01T18:02:07.851-05:002016-12-01T18:02:07.851-05:00Great advice. My weakest areas are pacing and sust...Great advice. My weakest areas are pacing and sustaining conflict. I'm also pretty bad at description, so there is always work for me to do after that first draft!! And the 2nd and 3rd ones as well :)Jemi Fraserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02214408467456320167noreply@blogger.com