tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4263988256560129564.post5596014270727360310..comments2023-10-30T08:00:54.059-04:00Comments on Laurel's Leaves: Reducing bloat: simple strategiesLaurel Garverhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03657218435228802535noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4263988256560129564.post-8510946050694803892013-01-08T10:42:07.301-05:002013-01-08T10:42:07.301-05:00Thanks! Some kinds of wordiness are subtle, yet si...Thanks! Some kinds of wordiness are subtle, yet simple to fix.Laurel Garverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03657218435228802535noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4263988256560129564.post-69212903508884930022013-01-08T10:40:59.863-05:002013-01-08T10:40:59.863-05:00I think this kind of sentence-level work is what s...I think this kind of sentence-level work is what separates the pros from the amateurs. Laurel Garverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03657218435228802535noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4263988256560129564.post-88030243220093460162013-01-08T10:39:51.295-05:002013-01-08T10:39:51.295-05:00Hope this proves helpful when the time is right. T...Hope this proves helpful when the time is right. This kind of sentence-level work comes after the big picture fixes. Laurel Garverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03657218435228802535noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4263988256560129564.post-78061668732224632252013-01-08T10:38:43.616-05:002013-01-08T10:38:43.616-05:00You're most welcome. Hope it proves helpful!You're most welcome. Hope it proves helpful!Laurel Garverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03657218435228802535noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4263988256560129564.post-43870461816012986042013-01-08T10:20:45.240-05:002013-01-08T10:20:45.240-05:00Great tips for weeding out the stuff that clogs up...Great tips for weeding out the stuff that clogs up the reading.Southpawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16539290964546504171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4263988256560129564.post-60623197818723230732013-01-08T09:25:53.555-05:002013-01-08T09:25:53.555-05:00How I love revisions, let me count the ways...How I love revisions, let me count the ways...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11622191037152999869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4263988256560129564.post-46062716005002192582013-01-08T02:39:47.719-05:002013-01-08T02:39:47.719-05:00I saved this so I could read it later.
......dhol...I saved this so I could read it later.<br /><br />......dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4263988256560129564.post-85205935647028841802013-01-07T12:42:35.182-05:002013-01-07T12:42:35.182-05:00thanks for this post. I'm in the process of ed...thanks for this post. I'm in the process of editing and can always learn new things to look for.Pattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00685341739870191402noreply@blogger.com