Just in time for today's "Indie Kissing" blogfest, Every Day Poets published my poem about my first kiss.
NORTH AND SOUTH
That splish-splash summer night you chose me
with a touch of your toe and slow smile....
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If you're so inclined, please rate it and like it. The editors include the highest rated pieces in an annual anthology.
I never did see that sweet guy again. His name was Russell Mc-Something-I-can't-remember. We exchanged a few letters, which was the death of that relationship. At 14, I was only going to invest in a long-distance relationship with a guy who was eloquent (he wasn't. Not even a little). :-D
Was your first kiss a wonderful memory or a not-so-great one?
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Lovely poem. My fave line--A deep dive and you bubbled under me. :) Happy <3 day Laurel!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Coleen. Happy <3 day to you too!
DeleteWhispering Dixie into me??? Oh what a great way to describe a kiss!!! Love it. Also loved this alliteration:
ReplyDeletelistening to your languid tales
of alligators, telling my most
shivery snowstorm stories
Thanks, Margo. It was fun to play with North/South contrasts in composing this bit of nostalgia about the sweet Florida boy from gator land.
DeleteSha-zam. I might have to start reading more poetry. Adore the title!
ReplyDeleteI kind of shamelessly stole it from Elizabeth Gaskell, though her novel from the 1850s isn't at all romantic, it's dark in a Dickensian kind of way.
DeleteStill works for an exploration of regional US conflicts though. :-)
What a beautiful poem, Laurel -- I love it and am going to bookmark the page so I can re-read. Really lovely stuff!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much. Some of my other published poems can be found in the "Books and publications" link at the top of the blog.
DeleteIt's great to see another poem in this blogfest. And I loved the imagery in the poem (-:
ReplyDeleteThanks Fida. I write fiction, too. But this poem's publication worked well for double-duty in the blogfest. :-)
DeleteLoved the poem, Laurel! And I rated it for you. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the rating, Margaret! It would be a thrill to be chosen for the anthology.
DeleteI love it! Will click over and vote now! My first kiss? Well, it was weird. I was 9, and it was with one of my older brother's friends. I think I posted about it a long time ago...
ReplyDeleteDidn't like it much. Didn't try it again til I was like 16--LOL! :D That one was better~ <3
Thanks, Leigh! Nine is pretty young to have boys throwing themselves as you. Would've freaked me out too! :-D I wasn't quite 14 when this happened. On a youth group mission trip, no less. He went to the church that was hosting us.
DeleteSo cute! I love it. I ran away from my first kiss. Literally. Took off and barricaded the door. Guess I wasn't ready! LOL
ReplyDeleteThat's hilarious. Personally, I found the whole riding on a guy's naked shoulders more weirdly intimate than the kiss itself. Actually the whole thing was a bit strange when I think about it. I was the quiet church girl who discovered this grit I rarely acknowledged having.
DeleteI don't generally "get" poems, but I loved this! Such a great, unique entry. :)
ReplyDeleteI honestly can't remember my first kiss. Not sure if that's good or bad.
Glad you were willing to give it a try. I seek to write accessible poems that open up the world, not leave a reader scratching her head.
DeleteNot remembering seems more good than bad, I guess? If it had been an extremely bad experience, it would still haunt you.
I loved that! Liked and voted :-) My first kiss was ... hehe, highly anticipated ;-)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Rachel. Anticipated kisses can be pretty wonderful too, as much as surprise ones like mine. :-)
DeleteMy first kiss... was memorable. That is all. =)
ReplyDeleteAh, you're not a girl to kiss and tell. :-D
DeleteWonderful poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much. It was a fun one to write.
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ReplyDeleteThe poem was lovely! Thank you for sharing. ;-)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sharon. It took me a long time to work up the nerve to submit that one to a publication because it's so intimate.
DeleteWonderful poem! I love the "whispering Dixie into me" line. :) My first kiss was weird and awkward, lol!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much. I get the impression I'm in the minority when it comes to first kiss experiences. :-D
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